I came across this poem by Pie Corbett
When I heard the music
When I heard the music by Pie Corbett
What do you think?
Can you complete the the sentence
“When I heard the music ……” in the comment box below. The best comments will be printed out and made into a poster for the music room.
To help inspire you listen to the wonderful Bobby McFerrin and write down what comes into your mind when you heard his music!
Thank you pie that is a nice thing to say I hope 5H Says that too.
Jennifer
I have posted my post as a comment and i would like you to put me as a blogger.
Katie
Okay Katie. I will talk to Mrs Schofield
mrsschneider
I love your musical poems. Have you performed these yet?
Pie Corbett
Thank you so much we really appreciate it …By the way we havent preformed these.
Christabel 5H
When I Heard The Music
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When I heard the music,It reminded me of my friend Alessia because she died,
When I heard the music,It was like I was in Colombia my beautiful home town,
When I heard the music,It was like I was in my imaginary place where unicorns are,
but really when I hear the music it feels like I am always with my wonderful family
My poem,By Jennifer In 5H
Jennifer
when i heard the music
my legs began to move
my arms swishing in the air
i heard birds chirping
shawn3
“When i heard the music
I fell like its just me and the world
and what the the word will be like in a lot of
years.
Manny
when I hear the music,
my blood began to,
flow my legs whent
side to side
Danny
when i hear the music
my heart starts to beat
I start to move my feet
my hands started to clap
my fingers started to snap
ellie-mae
When I heard the music I felt excited,it made me want to get up and dance it reminded me of disneyland
donya
When I hear the Music,
My feet move with the beat.
When I hear the Music,
My whole life travles back to Tukey.
When I hear the Music,
My heart moves with the beat.
When I hear the Music,
My arms awish through the air
Abby
When I heard the music my facebegan to be flooded with tears,
When I heard the music my soul began to cry,When I heard the music my body started to jump,
When I heard the music my foot started tap the floor
Jeffrey 4S
when i hear the music
my heart starts to beat
I start to move my feet
my hands started to clap
my finfers started to snap
ellie-mae
WHEN I heard the music my heart began to dazzle
When i heard the music my soul began to cry
when i heard the music the music my feet began to tap
when i heard the music my hands began to shake
DION
When I heard the music my heart began to beat,
my brain started to think of waves crashing against the ships,
and my body started to move in a dancing action
Jeffrey 4S
When I heard the music, my arms flew to the sky
I jumped up and down with my frown upside down,
I danced to the music oh and that was fun
I never knew i could have so much fun.
When I heard the music it took me back to school
I felt like I was in a movie with friend so cool
It made me want to jump
It made me want to skip all around like I was mad all along.
Christabel 5H
When I hear the music,
my shadow goes back,
to a party with great ,
music
sudheha
What a great image Sudheha! I love the idea of your shadow sneaking away!
mrsschneider
When I heard the music, my spirit took me back to Canada. But when I wake up in my bed, i am back home. Home sweet home. Hot chocalate leads me out bedroom and in the warm living room where the fire burns continuously without stopping for a breathe.
Rhodie 5H
when I heard the music it took me back to america with my brother , sister and my mum and dad,my cousins popped up , waving hello along with my aunt and uncle showing us to our rooms,my cousins friend playing basket all day long
jedd 5h
When I heard the music I saw a magical kingdom of people acting out breakdancing,
playing football,
and running.
Jeffrey 4S
when i heard the music my heart start`s to beat,
when i heard the music it reminds me of jason,
when i hear the music it reminds me of wayne rooney scoring,
when i heard the music it takes me back in time to 2002,
when i heard the musicmy feet start`s to dance to the beat.
joshua
When I hear the music,
My heart went back to,
Italy to my home town
matteo
Lovely poem Matteo!
mrsschneider
When I heard the music, i wanted to get up and dance
and swish away back to Colombia,and go away to my family in Cuba.
jennifer 5h
When I heard the music
My hands moved to the beat
Then, so did my feet
Next, I started singing along to the music of the song
All of a sudden my whole body moved along!
chantelle
when i heard the music
my feet was moving to the beat
Ellie
when i heard the music,
I get up and start dancing behind my friends
plamen
when I heared the music,
plamen
When I heard the music
I felt wind blow my hair,
and on the night sky,
I see the stars glowing bright.
karthik
when i heard the music……..
i felt a heat wave going down my spin
and push ups going down my body with
stars coming from the sky i was overflowed with joy and happieness when the sun came up again the music started agian.
casey
When I heard the music…
I felt the cold breeze waving in the air
and stars jumping around in space
with the moon. The ocean animals
swimming with joy and us humans
overflow with happiness by the dawns
yellowness.
Oliwia
When I heard the music,
I saw the stars glowing down at me,
I felt happy of the singing and the beat,
Everything was beautiful as can be.
Ashley 5A
When I heard the music
Stars sparkled like diamonds,
Hearts pumped with love and life,
Praise jumped high.
When I heard the music
My hands tingling
and my toes jingling.
When I heard the music
The Autumn leaves fell,
The winter’s snow glistened,
The summer sun shone and
the spring blossom bloomed.
When I heard the music
I felt the snow as it rubbed against me
as the angels from heaven lit up Christmas.
antonia4
When i heard the music
I believe i’m really truly inside the video
Dancing with everyone around me
I sing so loud that the world hears me
and dance’s with me until the song ends
holly4
I really like your poem Holly .I hope you get to read this.:)
Katie
A great image Holly
mrsschneider
when i heard the music
i ran into my bed
turning the tv on
with a glance at the stars
knowing that my dad is watching over me
sonny 5A
What a great poem Sonny. Music can bring on strong memories can’t it?
mrsschneider
When I heard the music
I think of a magical kingdom with mermaids,unicorns and fairies living in one peaceful harmony as the huming birds hum collecting necter on a quiet Sunday morning.
olamietan
That would make a fantastic painting Olamietan!
mrsschneider
When I hear the music
i feel like i’m on stage in front of millions of people,just playing the guitar.
I feel like i’m going to exploed with joy.
i feel like i’m going to sing.
Holly B
When i hear the music,
Its make exploed in little bits,
Its make me like in a story,
Its makes me think of nature,
And it makes me happy.
Daniel v
When you say “It makes me like In a story” I know exactly what you mean!
mrsschneider
when i heard the music
my heard was throbing like a bass drum
the moon was brighting in the sky
the stars were exploding
i like the poem
HARRY
When I heard the music,
just don’t make the dynomite fuse it,
all the cars vrooming,
my feet was tapping.
Darrel 5A
When I heard the music
Violins with pumping sound,
Wedding bells ringing,
Children going to church
and the choir singing.
Maria
When I heard the musIc…
i felt a chill going down my spin.
Casey
When I heard the music,
I felt sparks fly inside of me as my toes tingeled with excitement.
I felt my stomach churn with glee and determination
I felt my hair stand on end, and do a repeated dance on my head.
When I heard the music,
My eyes squinted and my brain stiffened, as I tried to pick out what instruments were being played.
My heart pumped hard to the beat of the bass
When I heard the music
The dimple on my cheek raised as I smiled and enjoyed the beautiful sound.
joy4
Brilliant!
mrsschneider
When I heard the music,
I felt the cold, stong wind trying to push me over,
I could see the waves, but they were not as strong as they used to be,
I could hear the birds singing and they sang well,
I knew that I was in the perfect place…
kuharadan
When I heard the music,
I see the moon glowing amongst the stars,
I clunch my fist and press it hard agaist my chest,
My body feels in action.
Katie
When i heard the music
I felt like listening to it over and over again and when i heard it I felt like waching a film with my family nice and snugg.I also felt like I was famous and every one new how nice i was and i felt like jumping up and down singing the song i know like i love it because I always like singing songs that I like because when iam older i want to record the song and poblish it.I want to listen to it every morning when i wake up
honey
When I heard the music:
I feel like Heaven,
I can see stars twinkling around me,
It makes me think of my life which I can see is joyful.
Jacko
When I heard the music,
it makes me feel joyful,
I can see everyone dancing,
I feel the wind blowing in my hair
Bhashana
When I heard the music
the trees bending in the wind.
The cars racing like a tiger.
The stairs squeking like a mouse.
Christena
When I heard the music,
I heard a lot of birds chirping.
My heart goes racing,
I feel on top of the world
Cameron
When I heard the music
I felt wind pushing my soul down
droping me into to tears as a baby
entering me like the breezy wind
giving me a cold.
Alisha 5A